In the class of L/L writing we learnt how to write a short story, after making some activities we had to write a short story that ficished with the phrase, "That was the last time I saw him/her" This is my short story:
The disappearance
He is sitting there in the same cramped chair, waiting
the same gorgeous girl appeared. As the last time. He is sitting there. Now he
is 16, he is older, now he looks filthy, he needs to have a good bath. Totally not
as the last time. His hair is shabby, but he looks charming. He is looking at
the floor, depressed, he knows why he is there, but not what is going to
happen.
Surprisingly a door, which definitely wasn’t
there before, opens and lights the room. He wishes he could cover his eyes, but
he can’t because he is tied to the chair. A tall, peaceful man enters the room
through the recently opened door.
“Hello, George. You are here because we know
you, we know what you were going to do”. Explained the man.
“But wh…”.Tried
to say George
“Please
don´t interrupt and let me finish”. Continued the man “ I am Alexander I think
you know me”. George looked at Alexander.
“Yes I know
you”. George whispered, Alexander couldn’t hear him “we took you here, to our
special room, as the last time, because we need you , George, to tell us
something important, something important, something nobody, except for you knows.
You know what we are talking about, don’t you? ”. Said Alexander
“Well,
first of all I perfectly know what it’s that you want me to say”, George
commented “But I don’t know. I also want to know. I miss her so much, I don’t
know where they are. I looked for them for seven months but I can’t find them! “,
Shouted George crying.
“You are
lying! Please George, you know perfectly well where they are but you are protecting
them. Why are you protecting those traitors? They betrayed you! “, Accused
Alexander.
“They aren’t
traitors! They are my friends and I don’t even know if they are alive!”
“Ok George.
All the same, we need you. Please come with me”, Alexander unleashed George
from the chair
Both walked
through the door. When they got out George saw the room was totally deserted,
except for some luxurious computers and desks in the spacious room.
“This is
the main room, where we see everything that you do”, explained Alexander.
“Everything
I do”, Asked George.
“Yes, we
have been following you to know where your…”friends” are hiding. But don’t
worry we haven’t found anybody”
Alexander
took a gun and pointed at George “George! I’m not playing. Tell me now where
they are! It’s not a joke. Tell me!”
“Alexander
please understand. I also want to know where they are and if they are alive but
I don’t know, I’m not lying. We were looking for the man that robbed the bank
with costumes in the street when someone came and captured them but, I don’t
know why, they left me alone. I couldn’t do anything to save them. They were
too fast. I waited for two hour for someone to appear but nobody came. I am
telling the truth” replied George.
“Are you sure
this is the truth? If I ever discover that you are lying to me, I am going to
kill you and all your new friends. As the last time”. Said Alexander
“You won’t
have to do it. That was the last time I ever saw them”
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